Day two and Blogmas is still running relatively smoothly.
Though for the sake of full disclosure, I have the woman version of a man cold, i.e. a cold, so I may or may not be able to keep up the blogging momentum.
All complaining aside, shall we get on with the review for short story number two?
Forty-Third C Platoon by C.P. Boyko
Print Length: 20 pages
Normally I am a big fan of wartime historical fiction, but I got to tell you my expectations for the advent calendar had more of a cheery vibe.
Don’t get me wrong, there were certain elements, like how the reader follows a mainly female platoon around a war torn countryside, that I liked about the short story. Alas I just have more bad than good on this one.
Firstly, I really didn’t like the conversation structure of the piece. It was very hard to follow what person was saying what thing, and even when my brain finally caught on it was nothing but repetition.
I also disliked how the second last ‘chapter break’ focused on a male character rather than a female. Don’t get me wrong, I have nothing against male protagonists, it’s just Boyko focused on a myriad of strong female characters only to close the story with someone I held no attachment to.
Also, and this may have just been my own misunderstanding, but I was never quite certain on the location of the story. Was it meant to be ambiguous, or is it actually set during a specific historic period? If anyone can answer this, please let me know!
Hopefully my thoughts and opinions on Day 3 will be better.
Overall Rating: 2 out of 5 stars.
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